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Saturday 24 January 2015

computer Engineering (networking) Week 4


58-13-03, Flat Sri Sabah 3A,
Jalan Cheras,
56000 Kuala Lumpur,
Wilayah Persekutuan.

19 January 2015

No 7 Jalan 109E,
Desa Business Park, Taman Desa,
 58100 Kuala Lumpur,
Federal Territory of Kuala Lumpur.

Dear Sir/Madam,

APPLICATION FOR THE POST OF A COMPUTER ENGINEERING (NETWORKING)

I would like very much to apply for the position of Computer Engineering (networking) advertised in the 'New strait Times' dated 18 January 2015.

I am currently completing my training in Computer Engineering (networking) at  Institut Kemahiran Mara Lumut in short, I believe that i have the skill in the troubleshooting computer field and the profiesion drive needed to contribute to your firm.

Enclosed  are my resume and certificated that include my qualifications and experience. I look forward to the posibility of an interview at your convenience. I hope i may be granted on interview where i can explain my qualfiedeifully.

Your faithfully,
Farid
MUHAMAD FARID BIN MOHD KHIRZAM
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13 comments:

  1. Unknown1 February 2015 at 04:55

    what is mean qualfiedeifully?? i don't get it...

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  2. Unknown5 February 2015 at 04:08

    Your Faithfully must be Yours Faithfully .. overall awesome essay 😊

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  3. Unknown8 February 2015 at 01:54

    nice...like that my son...

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  4. Unknown8 February 2015 at 02:52

    Only Your faithfully should be change to Yours Faithfully

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  5. Unknown8 February 2015 at 03:03

    Opening: "New Straits Time" please avoid errors. It will effect the reader especially if the reader is meticulous.
    Content: Grammatical error "I have the skill in the" should be "skills in/required skills in".
    Signature: "Yours" faithfully.....not "your" and what does "qualfiedeifully" means?? a new dictionary word??
    Overview: Good Job but revise on the grammatical errors and minor fact errors.

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  6. repair phone pantai dalam kuala lumpur8 February 2015 at 03:13

    u have put in position on receiver’s address

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  7. Unknown8 February 2015 at 03:45

    Good Job on writing the letter even thought its not perfect

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  8. norsalmina8 February 2015 at 05:58

    your name need to bold

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  9. intan_ahmad8 February 2015 at 06:13

    Good! but just bold your name :)

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  10. Unknown8 February 2015 at 07:21

    your letter is good but your some incorrect spelling and you need bold your name...

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  11. Unknown8 February 2015 at 08:03

    Good , keep up a good work ..

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  12. Unknown9 February 2015 at 00:06

    Farid, please put 's' for the word "your faithfully" and bold your name. Overall, good letter!

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  13. Unknown11 February 2015 at 09:06

    Assalamualaikum sado...your letter look good but there is a lot of incorrect spelling need to fix it...anyway keep going man :)

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